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#1 Postby The Vulture » Thu Dec 04, 2008 3:54 pm

Now, I realize this is unorthodox. But bear with me here.

I have written a standalone adventure, and I feel that it makes a pretty kickin' introduction to SW or even roleplaying in general for players. I don't intend to sell it or anhything.

I saw the survey about more free SW adventures, and people seem to be overwhemingly in support of the idea. Therefore, I'm offering this adventure to anyone who would like it, on the condition that you submit me some criticism and feedback when you're done playing it.

As for the plot, it's best described as Enter the Dragon with a dose of 24 set against the backdrop of the Thirty Year's War. Pregen characters are included.

If anyone is interested, let me know and I'll email it to you.

Thanks in advance!
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#2 Postby The Angle » Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:37 am

Thirty Years' War? I'm there. Send it to TheAngle@comcast.net.

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#3 Postby MountZionRyan » Fri Dec 05, 2008 12:28 pm

What is the expected time of play? I'm due to run a one-shot before long. Would it fit in a ~4 hours of play?

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#4 Postby RegularDarcy » Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:38 am

Colour me intrigued. darcyhaylenatgmaildotcom

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#5 Postby Tuesday » Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:20 pm


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#6 Postby Seeker Jon » Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:40 pm

I'll have a read as well. jon DOT ginsberg AT gmail DOT com

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#7 Postby skylion » Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:06 pm

Yep:

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#8 Postby kaltorak » Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:27 pm

Mee to:

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#9 Postby jeff » Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:51 pm

I'll take one. Stinger_90@hotmail.com
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#10 Postby Jeffrywith1e » Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:18 pm

I'd like a copy, please.

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thank you.

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#11 Postby AFDia » Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:51 am

Unfortunately I don't have time to test it now, but I hope you will release it for all of us if it's finished. :)

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#12 Postby Preatori0us » Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:52 am

I'd like a copy of it as well please... Preatori0us@hotmail.com
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#13 Postby Lord Skudley » Fri Dec 19, 2008 2:19 am

I'll jump on the Band Wagon

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#14 Postby Dolomite23 » Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:58 am

I would like a copy, also

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#15 Postby Harboe » Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:06 pm

I'd love a copy as well: philip.harboe@hotmail.com


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#16 Postby Lord Inar » Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:20 pm

Would you be interested in submitting it to Shark Bytes?

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#17 Postby The Vulture » Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:52 am

Sorry about the length on my reply. Copies are forthcoming. Also, don't forget to send me any criticisms!
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#18 Postby Flynn » Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:57 am

I'd be interested in reviewing it, as well:

jason.flynn.kemp ~AT~ gmail.com

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#19 Postby OSIAdept » Fri Jan 02, 2009 12:23 pm

I am intrigued by the combination of genres

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#20 Postby jeff » Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:06 pm

I'd like one too, please. stinger_90@hotmail.com.
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